Good stuff man, Liked it a lot, keep it up!
Good stuff man, Liked it a lot, keep it up!
This was pretty good, I just have a few things to say.
1. You get a little bit too lost in the sauce when it comes to writing, I know it's always fun to insert every joke you got on your mind into the script, but sometimes you gotta go to the cutting room floor and really think about what doesn't need to be in the script, doing this you get to the more action oriented animation sequences faster, and you have less to work on.
2. If you're gonna do your own original credits theme song, you should probably make your own instrumentals rather than lifting from Sonic Mania
Thanks for the critique, I'll be sure to take this into account for Episode 2!
perfection
I like your art style
Rub the ketchup in his eyes, whip out the paper clip and slit his throat with it and then open up the shot gun shells and pour the gunpowder in his open wound, eat the tater tot and shit it out in his mouth, then clear yo dirty ass pockets of your pocket lint because that's just common courtosey, YOU FREAK.
And then give him your lunch money :^)
God damn it FUCK YOU for reminding me of that shitty Pachinko game from Shenmue 2
Finally, someone who belivees in Keeby supremacy
This isn't really uh... anything, are you sure you uploaded the right version and not only just the first scene?
Wow that sucked.
Glad to be a part of this!
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