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You lost me at "The gang finds a baby" plot.

Zeddyzi responds:

trust me its not gonna be what you expect LMAOOO

This was pretty good, I just have a few things to say.

1. You get a little bit too lost in the sauce when it comes to writing, I know it's always fun to insert every joke you got on your mind into the script, but sometimes you gotta go to the cutting room floor and really think about what doesn't need to be in the script, doing this you get to the more action oriented animation sequences faster, and you have less to work on.

2. If you're gonna do your own original credits theme song, you should probably make your own instrumentals rather than lifting from Sonic Mania

KStudiosHQ responds:

Thanks for the critique, I'll be sure to take this into account for Episode 2!

Ehhhhhh, this was okaaaaay, and by that i mean the last joke barely saved it, but every other joke in this toon has been done by literally every other gaming webcomic and internet parody in the early to late 2000s.

wavetro responds:

Great points! thank you

I mean... It's not really an episode, just a full length version of the theme song, but hey, it's well animated and i enjoyed it well enough, nice sweet,cute, and extremely well animated.

You sure did learn how to put ONE other author's newgrounds account in the credits, but i guess you shoved the rest of the animator's credits in the description box that everyone quickly scrolls past by, Progress! yay! you almost did it correctly!

OllieAndScoops responds:

Look, only 3 people who work on this show have Newgrounds accounts. And when I credit them, apparently they have to approve it or else they won't show up. One animator so far is the only one to see my request and approve it. Also, I guarantee you'll watch our next episode (#5) coming right after Christmas, and it'll be our longest yet at 12 minutes!

Ha ha! i love how you don't credit the animators newgrounds accounts every single time!

OllieAndScoops responds:

I'm brand new on Newgrounds and don't know how to do that. Can you help me?

the animation and artstyle is quite good, but the writing leaves something to be desired, the jokes are kind of dated and the whole thing is just the team sitting down and talking, which kind of makes the whole animation feel like it's just kind of meandering. also some of the voiceacting was a bit iffy.

FergusonWinston responds:

Thanks for your input. Would you be interested in seeing what more we have planned?

Dude, this is straight up trash I won't lie, the characters are just standing around telling stories and not doing anything engaging and they're drawn way too detailed to actually animate properly. If you actually want to get into animation you gotta remove the shading and simplify the designs, like a lot, you got way too many colors goin on with these desins as is.

FroggywithFries responds:

These are simple conversational videos to be put out regularly, this is not an attempt at actual animation.

Love this series dude! i never knew something like this could have so much potential, but now I see that it does, keep up the great work.

Willytoons responds:

Thanks!

WOAH! I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU FRICKEN KILLED BOWSER!

RylanLego responds:

XD It had to be done!

Dat boy lookin' like dipper, i see what you doin'.

Nominous responds:

I don't get it? What am I doing?

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